My crit is that there could be variety in each character's description, since it's a bit limited to hair and eye colour at the moment. It's not bad in this fic (actually, toying with the idea that angels start out nondescript, then look more and more individualized as they assert their personalities) but it's something to keep an eye out for.
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Date: 18/12/09 07:03 pm (UTC)Gabriel needs to post-it a label on Uriel's door.
My crit is that there could be variety in each character's description, since it's a bit limited to hair and eye colour at the moment. It's not bad in this fic (actually, toying with the idea that angels start out nondescript, then look more and more individualized as they assert their personalities) but it's something to keep an eye out for.